This is really cool. I like the staging and feeling- However, you could tighten it up quite a bit if you stand away farther and zoom in to compensate- you'll notice your subjects will seem denser and more orderly (if that makes any sense? ) -A lot of photographers will use longer lenses to do just that- especially when there are multiple subjects- anyway- I'm rambling- good job, keep shooting and I look forward to seeing your future material!
No prob! Actually, you might be able to pull it off with your camera- it just depends on how far you can zoom in- here's kind of a dramatic illustration for what i'm talking about- [link] -like, in the top shot, it's obvious the photog was standing right over the flowers with a wide-angle and in the bottom shot they pulled way back / zoomed in to get the flowers *and* emphasize that dramatic rock/bridge in the BG- it's pretty cool and it would definitely work for a shot like 'Stagger' -hopefully that helps
I need to have another shoot asap!!